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The Ways of the Goddess



The birth was difficult, its process lasting well past the hours of night and into the following day.
In the forest canopy, voices rose; singing the small one into a world of wisdom and far green spaces under an endless sky.

"This one," the Elder said to his father, "will change the world."

The days passed, and still they sang. Peace for the mother, sorrow for the ones she left behind.

The Lifestream would remember, carry her spirit to sing before the Goddess.

"He has already rent mine asunder," his father replied without malice. "His will be a hard path."

"Yet the ways of the Goddess are beautiful; as is he."

The Elder bowed her head in acknowledgment, then asked in the Holy tongue:

"Hast thou a name for thy firstborn?"

His father gazed down upon the tiny form in his arms, smiling though his eyes were blurred with sorrow.

"Chaos. He shall be called Chaos."
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A bit of drabble...Chaos' origin
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:iconremembrance123:
Mood: Joy ~Remembrance123 Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
The life you give Chaos... it's, wonderful!
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:iconvinvalenwind:
Chaos was so very intimidating to me when I first began to write him, but has grown to the point of where I really enjoy him. Its fun to see just how many angles from which he can be explored...this one actually has a 'sequel' of sorts, called 'Upon Ancient Winds'. *rofl for shameless pimpage* :XD: Thank you again, dear Remmy! *slurp*
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:iconenide-dear:
Sad and sweet...makes me wonder how little Chaos ended up in Hojos clutches :(
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:iconvinvalenwind:
Bless...thank you so much, Enide! :hug: I have to wonder that myself, and I think Fetherhd is working on a most excellent explanation for that very question in her 'Wings of Trust'. She's certainly left us some marvelous hints on the matter, hasn't she? :heart:
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~fetherhdsfanfic Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
OHHHHH... AWESOME little dabble!!
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:iconvinvalenwind:
:huggle: Thank you, dear Fethers!

I am so stoked about your exploring the angle of how Chaos ended up in Hojo's hands...especially with your delicious hints re the power of True Names. Most excellent indeed...
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~fetherhdsfanfic Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:) I loved this the first time I read it...It and the other two really helped the idea for "Wings" to coalesce.
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:iconlittle-miss-synful:
this is brilliant :meow:
and i can just imagine ickle Chaos...so cute >.<
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:iconvinvalenwind:
Bless...thank you! The challenge was a stumper at first, but then Chaos said: 'You weren't supposed to find out about my baby pictures' *hides* :XD:
I have to agree...tiny!Chaos would be nothing less than adorable...
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:iconlittle-miss-synful:
you're very welcome! :meow:
:noes: i would absolutely love to see Chaos' baby pics...especially any pics of little baby Chaos in the bath tub! :XD:
i know right! you'd just wanna pinch his little cheeks...but then you'd probably get a finger or 2 bitten off!
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